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We take wings
and swords,
and spy glasses.

We take ships
that ride clouds
and pointed ears.

We take up the stories
and write them deep:
drying ink on our ribs.

We take the courage,
the honor and sacrifice,
the hero-ness,

because courage
and honor
once owned,

even for a little while,
leave traces
we can follow back.

What would we look like
if we looked like the hero
of every story we ever read?

What face would be ours?
What would we know?
How strong would we be?
There are some strange phrases out there,
and headlines might be half of them.
I wonder if they catch us through sensationalism
(cheap or otherwise)
or if they catch our curiosity.
"Lost Modernist?"
What could they mean?
How does a letter have "acoustic force,"
and so we take the bait,
(which is just the tail end of a string)
and follow it to find the mind
where word-twirls dovetail with reality.

(Dovetail? Who thought up that one?)

I guess some people must be satisfied—
they must feel whole and complete
when they learn what "long silence" means,
or how someone can talk about "coming home from a world away."
I'll admit,
the part of me that likes to make the bed
and wants yes-or-no questions to be answered with a yes or no,
is quieted by information making sense.

But another part of me
(the part that leaves socks on the floor
and desperately misses finger-painting)
wishes she could walk from one non-sense phrase
to another,
like jumping rocks
over a laughing stream.
The yellow is gone from the well-trod leaves.
Now they're gray ghosts in black mud,
waiting for white snow.

Even the sky is an empty blue,
as if it's saving a seat on a crowded bus,
looking over his infinite shoulder
for the tempestuous woman he's waiting for.  
I have asthma
so breathing sometimes feels like grabbing ghosts
and trying to pull them through mist.

It makes me deliberate
because each pull of cold air
is deliberate.

It slows me down.
It makes me aware.

I stare around at the world--
gray skies,
yellow leaves,
a muddy river--
and I wonder at the wind,
how I can feel the world breathing.
the spider's web
hangs between a green leaf
and a gold one
Haiku 50: for the 2014 Second Spring Contest
Form: Haiku
Region: North America
Season: Definitely autumn here
Kigo Category: Plants
Kigo: The reference to the gold leaf

I live right next to one of the few wet lands in my desert area. It's covered in cottonwood trees whose leaves all go from green to bright golden yellow every autumn. Sometimes it seems like they change overnight.

This is an entry for the 2014 Second Spring Contest hosted by the Haiku Club. And you should read all about it and then enter yourself! I would love to read a hundred or so entries, so get cracking!
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"A haiku is not just a pretty picture in three lines of 5-7-5 syllables each. In fact, most haiku in English are not written in 5-7-5 syllables at all--many are not even written in three lines. What distinguishes a haiku is concision, perception and awareness--not a set number of syllables. A haiku is a short poem recording the essence of a moment keenly perceived in which Nature is linked to human nature. . . The poem is refined into a touchstone of suggestiveness. In the mind of an aware reader it opens again into an image that is immediate and palpable, and pulsing with that delight of the senses that carries a conviction of one's unity with all of existence. "

-Cor Van Den Heuvel, 1987
The New York Times Book Review

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SCFrankles Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks so much for the watch ^^ :icongivecupcakeplz:
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Crazyhedgy Featured By Owner May 21, 2014
Happy birthday! :hug:
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RedDragonfly Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2014
Hooray for the DD!
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zippip Featured By Owner May 1, 2014
It's very cool.
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Haikumato Featured By Owner May 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Happy Birthday! :la:
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zippip Featured By Owner May 31, 2013
Thank you very much. It was a good day.
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Mirrasae Featured By Owner May 21, 2013   Writer
Happy Birthday!!
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zippip Featured By Owner May 31, 2013
Thank you!
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BeaneBandit Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2013
Thanks for the feedback on my submission!
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puzzledpixel Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks for the fave! :eager: also, nice journal entry about haikus!:squee:
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